i liked it i just hate how i rode there. 
well, i would love beeing able to ride like you. I don't see what you find negative about the way your ride ?
but i can understand. it is just like hearing your own voice after its been recorded, most people hate the sound of their own voice. It's probably about the same with riding maybe ? the way you envision your riding mentally is not what you eventually get in reality.
when i made small edits of my riding i was surprised at how slow i was riding, i thought i was riding reasonably fast but i'm very slow, hahah ! and also i thought i was very sketchy but i found out i was riding a lot smoother that i thought.
well anayway back to the edit, really good riding in there, i could never thank enough the riders who take the time to make edits for us to see online. I am riding alone 100% of the time so it helps me keep motivated to ride !! thanks!